![]() And in doing so, it completely erased the character of Peter Pan. Yet here, the author was like, okay but imagine Peter Pan but an adult, tatted, and he smokes cigarettes. The whole point of Peter Pan is that he's unwilling to grow up. I think it's weird when anyone ages up a character who is traditionally a child JUST to write them having sex. Choosing Peter Pan to center around your reverse harem erotica is strange. Yes, I read all the trigger warnings and whatnot. I understand this is a dark romance novel featuring a reverse harem. Something I want to point out before I discuss the plot. I find it hard to believe this was edited at all. ![]() There are many spelling errors, fragments, over-usage of single sentence paragraphs and unbelievably poorly written dialogue. Before I get into the story, let's talk about the writing. ![]() Anyone who has seen it will be familiar with what I mean. ![]() Many aspects of this remind me of the third season of OUAT. Holy god, this book was an absolute mess. ![]()
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